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listen to my plea .
akjsd
post May 3 2005, 05:12 PM
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close my eyes
and count to three .
listen to my only plea
shield me from their wicked lies .
help me finally see & let me realize,
that you're the one for me .

protect me from the rain
of never-ending tears .
make me forget about my pain,
erase away all my fears .
help me to stay sane,
because as it appears,
my love for you, i cannot feign .
you've always been here, all these years .

how could i have been so blind ?
to shun you the way i did .
lets leave all those memories behind .
into the backs of our minds,
where they should be hid .

please accept my apology,
thanks for listening to my plea .
i hope that you'll forgive me ,
i hope that you too will see .
it took me long to realize too,
but in the end, i know that
i'm still in love with you .
 

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lidoxangie   listen to my plea .   May 3 2005, 05:12 PM
stephinika   not bad. it rhymes and flows pretty well and you g...   May 3 2005, 10:39 PM
x3__iGiVEup   i like it! especially the way it rhymes =)   May 10 2005, 06:22 PM
not_your_average   wow... that sounds like something i would write...   May 10 2005, 07:22 PM
toodlepops.   Excellent, I can really feel it. =)   May 13 2005, 09:40 PM
imadorkabledxd   whoa...i liked it. the rhyming was goodQ!!   May 14 2005, 10:25 AM


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