The Aftermath, This isn't a serious piece.. |
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 Mar 7 2005, 03:44 PM
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 fell in love with a boy  Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965  |
If no one likes it I'm not really worried, i didn't put much effort into it.. I know, that seems wrong, but I've just been really busy....
To me it sounds kind of country even though most of the things I write are in a more Rockish tone .. I guess Country really is the music for the heartbroken. I felt this way, but it is more subtle now, so don't worry! Please, enjoy!  LindseyWalking down these hallways A sea of faces I sail Pick out your face Should I say hi or bail And I continue on. There's nothing really wrong But there is nothing for me here You go your own way And I'll go mine Just take it easy I'll be fine Too many distractions around here for me to move on.. Please tell me I wasn't wrong.. I talked to my best friend today She talked about friends Convinced me I was okay. And I guess I knew it too But it's so hard when I see you. Face to face. Unexpectedly, Your reflection catches my eye In the window on the sidewalk Boy I can not tell a lie.. I miss you.. And I am going out of my mind. |
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Mar 7 2005, 07:44 PM
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fell in love with a boy Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965 |
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Mar 8 2005, 04:04 AM
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 Yawn Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,530 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,772 |
I thought it was good :) I could relate to it in the past, I always love the way you write! Keep submitting :)
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Mar 8 2005, 02:21 PM
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i didn't think it was that bad at all. a piece thats quite easy to relate too. great job.
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