Death Beckons, ... Options

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Another piece I wrong a long while ago, I haven't read through this one before I posted it so my memory of it is kind of vague. Post your thoughts, ideas and what not. And if anyone has any suggestions on how I could improve on such a thing please leave your suggestions too please, they would be most appreciated

Death Beckons

Hello?
I hear you calling
Calling my name
Every passing second your voice grows louder
You’re coming to me
I’m going to you
Even though I know who you are
And I know what you have done
And what you will do for the rest of your unending life
I strangely do not fear your voice
And these foot steps that I can now faintly hear
Through this misty haze
So thick that I can barely see my own hands
My heart beat steadies
Another breath I take in
And you whisper my name
Through the fog
There you are, you have finally come
Your shadow in the distance appears
No, that is no shadow
That is truly who you are
An apparition of nothingness
Draped in your black cloak, that smothers the ground
Choking it by the intoxication of your essence
Your hood masks your face
I see nothing with my eyes by a black abyss
A pit that continues for all eternity
Black and nothing but
Despite your position among mankind
You hide everything from the world
And with all precautions, mask your face so well
With all precision
Are you afraid?

[*stephinika*]

i love the point of view it comes from, as well as the imagery...almost reminds me of the entity 'death' from neil gaiman's series, though she's a woman without the cloak but the beginning part reminds me of her...anyways, i'm rambling but i liked it.

[RiddleMeWonders]

As Steph said, I love the imagery.

It's almost as if it could indeed be an epic..