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| *islandgirl4eva* |
 Mar 1 2005, 04:12 PM
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I hate it when cliques hate on "outsiders".
people are so cliquey and the cliques are just so picky goth, punk, poseur, prep the teenage heart lacks certain depth in the media today deception is at play it's nothing but a game to get the greedy fame the ones who are most coy view the human mind a toy bending, shaping, molding their claws forever holding the popular thrive while the others struggle to survive always having to fight for fifteen minutes in the light thanks to a popular thief that time is much more brief reaching for hope falling on a downward slope there's black and white and white and black but somewhere in-between in-between there's a gray as gray as any day in-between there is me just as gray as i can be |
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Mar 1 2005, 05:02 PM
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thats really good... and soo true :-X
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Mar 1 2005, 07:55 PM
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i love it. such great meaning...well written too.
 awesome job.
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Mar 1 2005, 11:13 PM
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I think that's very real and true. Something I love about a great poem. Great job.
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Mar 4 2005, 02:22 AM
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Kurrrayyyzzeeeee. Great way to pick apart teenage life. So very true. Makes me thing of where I belong in your view. Keep it up
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