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post Feb 24 2005, 03:35 PM
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Another ditch in the road... you keep moving
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come find me

i'll be down the street from shangri-la,
hid between the shadows on your wall.
living next door to neverland
if you should want to talk

aways away from wonderland
under the purple sky
walking the streets of atlantis
if you should want to walk

the highways of valhalla
and the backstreets of narnia
are where i'll always be
if you want someone to love

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yeah... a poem
 
 
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*stephinika*
post Feb 24 2005, 04:30 PM
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ooh i like it...i like the different places you used. very nice. thumbsup.gif
 
RiddleMeWonders
post Feb 24 2005, 05:14 PM
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fell in love with a boy
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I loved The Chronicles of Narnia...

Again, you draw your reader in, which I love about your writing.
It's refreshing.
 
racoons > you
post Feb 24 2005, 05:18 PM
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^^ thank you!

i loved narnia too... i used to sit in a warddrobe with a flashlight and read them... i need to re-read...
 
sarso
post Feb 28 2005, 12:50 AM
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I admit...I still read the chronicles of narnia. great stuff never grows old.
 

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