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post Feb 25 2005, 12:26 PM
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Another ditch in the road... you keep moving
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..A
D R
N O
..U

again
circles
seesaw
we saw
the future
in the butterfliy's wing
crushed in the grill of the car

V
ER
IFY

me
be
james
playing games
with the life
we have come to resent

LI
EV

or
evil
together
as one
you cant escape it
we doom ourselves

I

S

O

L

A

T

E

D

by
obsession
choice
nothing left to give
we inherit
a wasteland we wathced you destroy
 
c0oki3_m0n$tah
post Feb 25 2005, 08:54 PM
Post #2


Ooh, Miranda.
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verry cool. i had to reread it a couple times to understand it tho. good job=]
 
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post Feb 27 2005, 01:10 PM
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Seien Sie bitte mein Geliebter!
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I like it. Very fresh. Took me a few seconds to get the "around" though...
 
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post Feb 28 2005, 06:21 AM
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Azn at heart
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oooh! I get it! awsome!
 
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post Feb 28 2005, 03:16 PM
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that is so awesome. i love the way you write.
 
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post Feb 28 2005, 09:17 PM
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rwar (;
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erhh i dont get it wacko.gif

im kinda slow _dry.gif
 
rOckThISshYt
post Feb 28 2005, 11:53 PM
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Live Your Own Party
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I definatly like it. Good job.
 
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post Mar 1 2005, 01:17 AM
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Haha, very inovative, I like the picture I get from it, althought it may not exactly be the one you intend it to be, but it works for me, well written.
 
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post Mar 1 2005, 04:37 AM
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Bardic Nation
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so so, nothing special. nice innovation of the normal working shape though.
 
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post Mar 1 2005, 04:45 AM
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hmm nice
 

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