It's meant to be, /I want my life |
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 Feb 14 2005, 08:43 PM
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 Canadian Boyfriend, I think it's time  Group: Member Posts: 450 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 40,705  |
Version 1
I try To get you to notice me Let you know that I'm alive Please just take my hand Help me make it through the night This world is dark and grey Staring at the knife Right in front of your face What used to be your life This world is crazy My hope are fading Someone please save me It's meant to be I need Some help to make it through To make this life feel right Keep these thoughts away Things that I just might... What is this I see The tunnel is in sight Show me the way I'm blinded by the light This world is crazy My hopes are fading Someone please save me It's meant to be And it was meant to be But it just wasn't meant to be... Version 2 I try To be the woman that I am In times of broken lives Shattered dreams and plans Standing up to fight The pressures and demands Staring at the knife Holding in your hand What used to be your life This world is crazy My dreams are fading I want my life... You fight Youre f**ked up holy wars Fire anti-christ Jesus will come down And help us win tonight Now how should I feel I think I feel alright Tell me where to aim I'm blinded by the light This world is crazy My dreams are fading Noone can save me I want my life... And when i wake up you'll be here And it will be the way it was I don't know which to choose for my project. Which do you like better? |
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Feb 15 2005, 05:48 PM
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 *aSh* =] Group: Member Posts: 2,075 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,101 |
i like the first one =]
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Feb 15 2005, 05:56 PM
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Canadian Boyfriend, I think it's time Group: Member Posts: 450 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 40,705 |
QUOTE(StarryEyedSurprize @ Feb 15 2005, 5:48 PM) i like the first one =]  Thank you. ^^ Finally someone commented. |
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Feb 18 2005, 03:28 PM
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 LunchboxXx Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
Shadows would be proud =]. it's pretty rockin. keep it up. maybe make some longer chourses.
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Feb 19 2005, 06:22 PM
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 SCHGEB!SCHGEB! Group: Member Posts: 1,786 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 66,217 |
that is actually really good
alot of meaning in it =) |
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Feb 22 2005, 10:11 PM
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 my <3 is in Ohio Group: Member Posts: 899 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,599 |
both of them are brilliant. lots of meaning. awesome
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Feb 26 2005, 09:01 AM
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Canadian Boyfriend, I think it's time Group: Member Posts: 450 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 40,705 |
Yay ^_^ Thanks!
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Feb 27 2005, 03:17 AM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 91 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 106,896 |
That's wow, good one!
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