I Told You So Options

[cynicalstitch]

Since I doubt people will read the first chapter of Helena...here some angst for you since there's alot of depressing poems going around > <

If I could tell you all the times,
When I was nervous and insane
If you could've told me that you cared
If I could've told you what was on my mind,
would anything change?

I got a my knife and a bullet, ready to strike
and no one knows it yet, but since I told you,
would you tell them now?
You got a look on your face I'd like to hit so bad,
and I hope you know you're pissing me off...

You thought I was a loser, didn't you?
You refuse to admit you wanted to put me down,
just like everyone else did. And all I wanted was to
be liked...

I could've yelled this to everyone,
I could've threw away my sanity,
before I threw away my life..

but would've they cared of how I felt, and what I said?
Well.
I might as well make them dead.

Anyway, yeah...
C&C, please =D Yeah...I know not everyone around here is a professional poet... Most of what I make into poetry is actually just lyrics, but lyrics count as well. I plan to be a musician...
Hi guys.

[RiddleMeWonders]

Bravo. I like. Don't worry about all the depressing stuff. Usually I just put up what's going on right now in my life. I can def. see where the music would come into this, so that ambition is not so unbelievable. Good luck; Keep Writing.

My name is Lindsey.

[*stephinika*]

very nice. i like the whole idea...people can relate. well done.

[*Programmer*]

nice...very nice indeed..you could feel the character's tension throughout the whole thing...i like it alot...please make some more...

[cynicalstitch]

Thanks...=D
Good, wh00t! I'M STILL COOL