You Never Knew, .... because I never told you... |
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 Feb 18 2005, 04:15 PM
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 fell in love with a boy  Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965  |
You never knew I loved you
You never knew at all You never knew I saw you As you continued to love the wrong You never knew I wished for you the happiness I'd never have You never knew I kissed your memory As I lay down in my bed No; You never knew I loved you. We set the patterns unknowingly For the way we express our feelings the thoughts of actions and dealings Contemplating whether to take or leave The redeeming lilly We set the patterns unknowingly I never told you how I loved you. I never considered the cost of not doing so I never showed you my heart for fear of the breaking This would be my worst mistake making I never tried to jump after love Instead I watched you fall and rise slowly I never told you how I loved you. |
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| *Kathleen* |
Feb 18 2005, 05:46 PM
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Aww that was good. That's exactly how I feel towards someone in the situation I've put myself in.
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Feb 18 2005, 05:54 PM
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Whoa....great writer. That's the same in something I Have with this guy recently, except I don't love him yet..
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| *stephinika* |
Feb 19 2005, 01:34 AM
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lovely. easy to relate to too. great job.
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Feb 19 2005, 09:55 PM
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 Crying Behind Blind Eyes Group: Member Posts: 257 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,967 |
I read this...and I did something about my life. Thank you, sincerely. You have no idea to the depths this touched me. Your poetry is beautiful, and in that your soul is beautiful. Never stop writing.
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Feb 22 2005, 10:05 PM
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 my <3 is in Ohio Group: Member Posts: 899 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,599 |
that's good. i read it and i relate to it. and it pointed out to me all the things that i didn't do that i should have that i can't fix now. i agree with Sa-Chan. don't stop writing!
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Mar 1 2005, 12:17 AM
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 Live Your Own Party Group: Member Posts: 1,261 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,489 |
wonderful....
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Mar 1 2005, 12:40 AM
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Hurrrmmm... I like
 cause its very clear, and straight forward. Good job Keep it up. Looking fwd to readin more
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