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| *mishyerr* |
 Feb 21 2005, 08:59 PM
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Well, She knows She knew it;
She knew it all along; She promised herself so many promises That were broken all along. Swiftly dancing upon the wind, She'll hold onto his hands, But he's just a shadow, Made from imagination. Oh, sweet rapturing nights Of kisses not yet kissed Of sweet words not yet whispered Of Her own delicate lips. She knew that this The fragile thing her breast contained Would break into A shattered, frozen time. She broke it. She broke it. She broke it. |
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Feb 21 2005, 09:00 PM
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 NO. I'm not 13. or 14. or 15. or 16.  Group: Member Posts: 4,616 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 30,577 |
great diction =] and i love the repetition. man i sound like an english teacher. lol.
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| *stephinika* |
Feb 21 2005, 11:34 PM
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well done. i like the concept/idea behind it...very meaningful. good job.
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| *islandgirl4eva* |
Feb 22 2005, 12:45 AM
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OMG...Michelle, this is absolutely beautiful. I love it.
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Feb 22 2005, 10:00 PM
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 my <3 is in Ohio Group: Member Posts: 899 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,599 |
really good! love the concept. it's great
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