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one of those days
*islandgirl4eva*
post Feb 7 2005, 09:52 PM
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One of those days...

One morning I wake up and feel like the world is looking bright,
But the day goes on and reveals another view to me,
What once made me happy now fills me with fright,
Now I don't think this is a place I want to be.

It goes without saying I must live in my own mind,
Moving, transcending, changing with time,
Experiencing life through the daily grind,
Teaches you that it really isn't sublime.

Securities you claim,
Comfort you crave,
It's yourself you blame,
But about others you rave.

That feeling of loss drives a stake in your dream,
Puts a wrench in the works of your every attempt,
The star they said you were with a luminous gleam,
Now a gaping hole with your hope turned contempt.

And still you keep playing your show,
Every wound you will mend,
For what you now know,
Everyday's just a means to an end.
 

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islandgirl4eva   one of those days   Feb 7 2005, 09:52 PM
stephinika   oh my god. i love it. i can totally relate...i esp...   Feb 8 2005, 12:12 AM
islandgirl4eva   QUOTE(stephinika @ Feb 8 2005, 12:12 AM)oh my...   Feb 8 2005, 07:36 PM
stephinika   ^^ ehh i know exactly what you mean, but hey thats...   Feb 8 2005, 07:46 PM
Sa-Chan   This is really good. You rhyme very smoothly.   Feb 8 2005, 08:18 PM
islandgirl4eva   QUOTE(Sa-Chan @ Feb 8 2005, 8:18 PM)This...   Feb 8 2005, 10:17 PM
mishyerr   It's beautiful. So beautiful.   Feb 11 2005, 11:08 PM


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