Just written, theres an accomp that i need to key out |
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 Feb 24 2005, 05:56 PM
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 fell in love with a boy  Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965  |
I'm shedding my skin
It's falling to the floor I refuse to let you in But you keep knocking on my door The tide is coming now And I think I'll swim I'll escape you some how When the sky grows dim.... I climb out the window And the wind brushes my cheek as I taste the rainbow she plays hide and seek. I'm pulled into this A frozen smiling stare Would we let the kiss Or would we even dare? The sun is coming down and you walk beside me You upset my frown Until I'm smiling But you'd leave me now In my lonely place And I'm wondering how But I'll never see your face.. Again. I refuse to feel disgrace.. In the end.. |
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Feb 24 2005, 05:59 PM
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 Another ditch in the road... you keep moving Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152 |
so good! i love the second stanza and teh second hlf of the third especialy... its so good i drifted away in it
kudo and a half |
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Feb 24 2005, 06:21 PM
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i love it. theres something about it thats just great. wonderful job.
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Feb 24 2005, 08:36 PM
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Member Group: Member Posts: 18 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 103,746 |
Okay! I get it! You snuck out with someone who is awesome to escape? It's good though! It's really lovely. Alot of it was sumbliminal and sweet...
Hi, I'm Melanie...Did I already say that? =| |
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