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Perfection, a poem
racoons > you
post Feb 8 2005, 03:10 PM
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Another ditch in the road... you keep moving
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Anomalous in the sense that im easily explained
a rebel in the sense that i conform
different in the sense that im exactly the same

and sketching perfection...

naive in the sense that i know it all
popular in the sense that they dont know who i am
in love in the sense that i know only hate

and sketching perfection...

shallow in the sense of hidden depths
dark in the sense that the light shines through
finished in the sense that i'll never stop

and sketching perfection...

mute in the sense that im shouting
tone deaf in the sense that life's a melody
constant in the sense that im never the same

and sketching perfection...

heartfelt in the sense that i dont care
beautiful in the sense of a monster
ok in the sense that im so f**ked up that i dont know where to begin

a portrait of perfection...
 

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racoons > you   Perfection   Feb 8 2005, 03:10 PM
stephinika   not bad. i like it. has a nice flow to it.   Feb 8 2005, 08:38 PM
mysticalazxn   really sketch out a iamge of perfection   Feb 8 2005, 11:24 PM
< Random >   I like it... I write poetry, but I usually don...   Feb 8 2005, 11:32 PM


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