My Wish *poem*, not finished yet but yea... Options

[eloizhere48]

Looking at the stars in the night sky
Wishing for that right guy
Knowing that hope is with me along the way
Hoping and praying every single day
I wonder if my wish will ever come true
Finally it did when I found you
When I saw you, it felt like was love at first sight
The day was gloomy, but then it turned bright
The sun was shining again to let people see
The two people, just you and me
I knew that it was the moment to shine
And i finally knew that you were to be mine



im not done but what do you guys think so far?? if you guys have any tips for me, that would be super!! thanks