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Califorina Rain
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post Jan 26 2005, 03:47 AM
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I've lost myself in you.
Every word you say, make me more attached
Only to be thrown away, just like trash.
You told me that you loved me,
Now you are leaving me for a sunset over an ocean.
Why am I doing this? I will only start some commotion.

I listen to the songs you sent me
The ones that made me smile.
Now as I listen to them
I cry for the longest while.
I think of things that you said would happen
But now they are just a mere sentence.

My heart braces to shatter,
As only months, count down until you leave me for the sandy surf.
But do my feelings really matter?

I can't try and get you to stay
The palm trees swaying in the breeze call your name
While I watch, you walk away.
I have to stay in my silence, for I know you would never listen and stay.
I guess I just don't compare to that salty wave.


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mSz_dOrk_anGeL   Califorina Rain   Jan 26 2005, 03:47 AM
stephinika   well done. i like it...good imagery.   Jan 27 2005, 02:08 AM
MarilynBettieLupe   That's sumthing I felt in the heart! R U a...   Jan 27 2005, 02:51 AM
mSz_dOrk_anGeL   Thanks to both of you I wrote it at 4:30 am whi...   Jan 27 2005, 04:06 AM
Nicolatofu   oo nice I like how you used california's lovel...   Jan 27 2005, 08:07 AM


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