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only a lie.
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post Feb 1 2005, 08:44 PM
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damn u got owned!
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When we were together
You made my world perfect
When you smiled at me
my whole body melted
Now that it's all gone
I don't know what to say,
I cared for you so much
and now the pain won't go away
I cry myself to sleep at night
trying to forget you with all my might
but the harder I try,
the harder I cry
You had my heart and broke it
and now every time I think of you
Suddenly my whole body feels empty
I'm just a guy with tears on his cheeks
and you're just a girl with another guy to seek
I didn't need your love to only last a day
I didn't need your affection or that kind of play
You led me into a brighter day
But now that's all gone and darkness remains
I still have trouble believeing you're gone
Everything right all went wrong
I relive our memories with a heavy heart and sigh,
Why did you tell me you care if it was only a lie?


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yeah during my sad period. i mostly wright during this period so yeah.

all mt stuff is copy righted so don't steal it!
 
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post Feb 1 2005, 09:02 PM
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aw...that makes me sad. nice job though. sounds good.
 
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post Feb 2 2005, 06:36 PM
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nice....
 
HelloSunshine
post Feb 3 2005, 11:43 PM
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High Voltage!∞
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beautiful! i love it..it makes me even more sad than I already am though..
 
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post Feb 4 2005, 06:26 PM
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^ yeah.. the poem is really nice.. but it makes me sad too.. x_X
 
sheepy
post Feb 4 2005, 07:44 PM
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dizzy me up.
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cry.gif i love it. so deeep.
 
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post Feb 4 2005, 07:47 PM
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my <3 is in Ohio
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aww its sweet and sad...its good
 

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