the bloody wrists society, a bit morbid... |
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 Dec 23 2004, 04:46 PM
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The Bloody Wrists Society
Welcome to, The so-called "cult," The Bloody Wrists Society. Here we have, The anti-Christs, Depressed and very angry. An old, old secret, Since 1600, Kept by Salem's witches. The blades, the knives, Under lock & key, That is where we keep them. Oh, you want be? Just like me? A leader of the society? Ok, I say, First, clean the blades, Here's the key, just from me. You missed a spot, My little minion, Please start over, for my sake. Yeah.. kinda weird, but please reply! |
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Dec 23 2004, 05:42 PM
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 oh sweet pestilence  Group: Member Posts: 2,251 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 22,876 |
Interesting. I liked where you were going with with the "bloody wrists society" but you kinda went off topic...I don't know, but keep workin on it..you're doing good
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Dec 24 2004, 02:39 AM
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Brie Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,172 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,548 |
^ Agreed.
I like it, but yeah.. you did get a bit off-subject, but that's okay. I like the title. :D |
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Dec 24 2004, 12:05 PM
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 my <3 is in Ohio Group: Member Posts: 899 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,599 |
QUOTE(Despise @ Dec 24 2004, 1:39 AM) ^ Agreed. I like it, but yeah.. you did get a bit off-subject, but that's okay. I like the title. :D yeah what that person said. awesome title though |
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Dec 24 2004, 04:18 PM
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Yeah, thanks for the feedback, though!
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Jan 19 2005, 05:41 PM
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i like it but you didnt end it, it just stopped in what seemed like the middle of it. great job though. i love the title.
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Jan 22 2005, 07:18 PM
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 LunchboxXx Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
two words: super duper
hehe. it looks like you intended to add more to it, though. kinda ended at a cliff hanger, ya know? |
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Jan 22 2005, 09:46 PM
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 No Nose =[ Group: Member Posts: 101 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 87,291 |
Yes you kind of got off the main topic but the rest was still related, and it was good. Good job, I hope I'll see more writing from you. ;D
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Jan 23 2005, 09:16 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 433 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 72,380 |
i love it
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Jan 29 2005, 07:00 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,634 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,631 |
yea it's good, but it did get off topic =)
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