Bleed, Breathe, No More, PLEASE LEAVE COMMENTS |
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 Nov 17 2004, 09:55 PM
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 babygrl23  Group: Member Posts: 88 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 25,911  |
Everyday,
I die a little more, I cut a little deeper, I bleed, yet still I breathe, Everyday, I have more broken dreams, And I have lost more people in my life, I bleed, I bleed, I breathe, I breathe, No more. |
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Nov 19 2004, 07:57 PM
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 .Im.not.your.star. Group: Member Posts: 108 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 59,675 |
Uh..no offesnse, but thats just about the same as the evanescence song 'Breathe No More' but in poem form.
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Nov 19 2004, 08:08 PM
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babygrl23 Group: Member Posts: 88 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 25,911 |
really? Never heard that song before. Its not on Fallen, because then I would know it.
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Nov 19 2004, 08:11 PM
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 that heaven is overrated Group: Member Posts: 5,096 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 53,124 |
Yes, it does sound like Evanescence's "Breathe No More". That's what I first thought of when I heard the title. Umm, it's not on Fallen, though.
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Nov 20 2004, 07:05 PM
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.Im.not.your.star. Group: Member Posts: 108 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 59,675 |
Yeah, Its either an unrealsed or on Orgin. I dunno.
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Nov 21 2004, 01:25 PM
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babygrl23 Group: Member Posts: 88 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 25,911 |
I see....
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Dec 29 2004, 09:57 PM
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Newbie Group: Member Posts: 1 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 76,059 |
Whatever, you knew it was an evanescence song. You didnt think you made that up did you?
Thats like saying this is my poem: Do the Dew. |
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Dec 29 2004, 10:08 PM
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 Can't have the hand without the cock. Group: Member Posts: 2,481 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 50,622 |
Lol. Evanescence.
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Dec 29 2004, 11:39 PM
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Brie Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,172 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,548 |
Ahaha.
I was about to say "Wow, that's pretty good!" But now I won't! 
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Dec 30 2004, 03:35 AM
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 Apr 24 '05* 1000 posts! Group: Member Posts: 1,184 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 56,049 |
me too.. was about to say "nice one!". should i still post that up? or change my mind..?
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Jan 19 2005, 05:35 PM
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 ... Group: Member Posts: 818 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 32,366 |
well not exactly but pretty damn close
QUOTE "Breathe No More"
[Piano Solo Opening] I've been looking in the mirror for so long. That I've come to believe my soul's on the other side. All the little pieces falling, shatter. Shards of me, Too sharp to put back together. Too small to matter, But big enough to cut me into so many little pieces. If I try to touch her, And I bleed, I bleed, And I breathe, I breathe no more. Take a breath and I try to draw from my spirits well. Yet again you refuse to drink like a stubborn child. Lie to me, Convince me that I've been sick forever. And all of this, Will make sense when I get better. But I know the difference, Between myself and my reflection. I just can't help but to wonder, Which of us do you love. So I bleed, I bleed, And I breathe, I breathe no... Bleed, I bleed, And I breathe, I breathe, I breathe- I breathe no more. [Piano Solo Ending] |
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Jan 20 2005, 09:19 PM
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 Love wont save you. Group: Member Posts: 149 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 64,801 |
Yup, part of that definitely sounds like Breathe No More which is, as mentioned before, an Evanescence song...an old one, granted, but it is definitely not the song that would be forgotten (by people who know it, anyway.).
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