Fading Memories *poem*, My second one. . .*squirms a bit* |
 Jan 12 2005, 11:07 PM
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Hi . . this is my second poem, and it does sound kinda cheezy a bit. And i think it does gets kind of confusing, but please, comment it, and give me advice. That's MOST important to me right now. hahaha.
Faded Memories how come you are looking at me in a strange way. don't you remember me at all and the games we used to play. .? I guess it's kinda hard for you. I'm a total stranger, no doubt But I'm not gonna scream or pout. but the memories. . . at least tell me you remember those no? i guess those were just a pose. I'm torn apart. . still remembering your last words in my heart. "I'll never forget you" yup, that's what you said. But now. . . it's over. we went seperate ways. But I thought we could have lasted Friends forever |
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KingdomHeartsFan Fading Memories *poem* Jan 12 2005, 11:07 PM
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