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sikdragon
post Jan 6 2005, 09:04 AM
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Signs

Looking to the sky-
naught in searching right-
finding nothing without light-
passing blind and no such sign-

Desciduating flames and plight-
nomadic in nature and in night-
following the stars as a map-
never content drinking as a dogs lap-
centering the largest with a scope-
defining the past with a single note-

Pestering the nerves of the elder-
the gauge is rising as it begins to swellter-
hidden among the greens is another-
wraith of faith dividing the lovers-

wintery stones pass through the furnace-
gasping underneath and never reach-
the surface-
 

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sikdragon   Signs   Jan 6 2005, 09:04 AM
tyedyefroggy   I give it a 6   Jan 6 2005, 04:59 PM
RandomHero   I give it an 8, the only part i didn't like wa...   Jan 7 2005, 12:17 AM
MyVermilionPlague   Hm. 6.5 - 7. I don't especially like the last...   Jan 7 2005, 08:55 PM
sikdragon   those were my three favorite lines.. but i think w...   Jan 9 2005, 02:39 PM
fåll.tø.pïe©es   I liked it! I give it a 9   Jan 9 2005, 02:42 PM
smthngcrprategrl34   i'd give it a 7. good work though   Jan 9 2005, 06:06 PM
sikdragon   so what other than those three lines it's perf...   Jan 14 2005, 01:20 AM


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