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I Just Can't Stop, i hope u read n leave comments...
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post Jan 4 2005, 05:37 PM
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Just a poem i wrote during english class. We were watching some weird movie so i started writing and i came up with this. i want you to be honest with me alright? but don't be to mean...

I Just Can't Stop
shaking so violently
i just can't stop
no clue what's wrong
let's start with everything

hiding from everything
i just can't stop
no clue what i'm hiding from
let's start with everything

scared of everything
i just can't stop
no clue what i'm scared of
let's start with everything

cutting so deeply
i just can't stop
no clue why i do this to myself
lets start with everything

yeah i know the last stanza is a little shaky but tell me what you think!
 
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post Jan 4 2005, 10:33 PM
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"to start with every thing" how?

the reason why they are cutting themselves?

they know why they are cutting themselves...
 

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