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what is alone to you?
RiddleMeWonders
post Dec 28 2004, 01:29 PM
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What is alone?



What is alone to you?
What does it mean when you say, “we’re though.”
Feeling alone, and I’ll probably die this way.
What does it mean when you say “I do?”
What is alone to you?
And the feeling escapes, just for a while it breaks…
And I can empathize with you.

Where do you hide when you’re here?
Where to you chase your fears?
Come and waste the day, with me away.
Where do you hide when you’re here?
Will anything ever be clear?
And for a moment the clouds,
tear away from the shrouds…
And I can be there, here…

What does it mean when you say you're alone?
Were you stuck outside on a doorstep throne?
Come and taste the day, with me away.
What does it mean when you say "I do"?
What does it mean when you say you're alone?
And the suffering ends,
takes a step then it bends
Takes a last breath and says goodbye...
That's how I know that means alone- you might die.
 
inthemudhole
post Dec 29 2004, 03:32 AM
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Ooh.
I like that. _smile.gif
Nice job!
 
smthngcrprategrl...
post Dec 29 2004, 04:10 PM
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i like it. it's very pretty. good work
 
jambaJUICE
post Dec 29 2004, 08:41 PM
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Not badm, i like it. Good job.
 

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