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another, just a poem
audory
post Dec 22 2004, 05:20 PM
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your sweetest sin.
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when i look into my reflection,
all i see is you fading from my side,
w/out you, i'm another imperfection.
"an imperfection" to the mirror i confide.

another fading image...

my sobbing fists pound the glass,
my image falls and shatters,
everything happened so fast,
but now, nothing even matters.

another shattered heart...

we meant so much to each other!
i look up, half expecting you there
you walk past with another,
you're so happy, it isn't fair.

another broken girl...

the blood's dripping down my hand,
but it's really pouring from the heart,
all this misery wasn't planned,
but then, who'd known we'd come apart?

another tear-soaked cheek...

i close my eyes and shed my tears,
i never knew love's high cost,
i loved you for all those years,
yet all my love was lost.

another, another great love lost.
 

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audory   another   Dec 22 2004, 05:20 PM
angel-roh   o damn that's a wonderful poem! you descri...   Dec 22 2004, 11:44 PM
audory   lol thanks! my name's audrey.   Dec 27 2004, 01:47 PM
smthngcrprategrl34   woah that's really good! it's very des...   Dec 27 2004, 08:55 PM
audory   thanks! glad you guys like it.   Dec 28 2004, 04:22 PM
StarryEyedSurprize   wow, that's awesome! good job!   Dec 28 2004, 11:32 PM
anqie   That's really nice. I like the flow of it.   Dec 28 2004, 11:44 PM
audory   aww. it's being accepted. *claps*   Dec 29 2004, 02:17 AM


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