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 Dec 1 2004, 12:36 AM
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 :: Le Mono ::  Group: Member Posts: 67 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 52,334  |
 hey guys made another layout... I got tired of the ashlee simpson, so tell me what you think.my.xanga i encourage strong critique but tell me ways that i can improve it. please do not bash my feelings...  just remember i am an artist and i'm sensitive about my isssh mannnn! |
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Dec 1 2004, 12:46 AM
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 Natsumi is the XD Group: Member Posts: 915 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,203 |
it's alright. ^^ the simpleness is good. but the green just scares me.
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Dec 1 2004, 12:51 AM
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 ^ I might look scary but i'm the nicest person in cb! Group: Member Posts: 1,364 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,979 |
u should play around with scroll bar color. it look odd in ur layout.
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Dec 1 2004, 01:08 AM
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:: Le Mono :: Group: Member Posts: 67 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 52,334 |
 color scares u? i'll consider it.as for the scrollbar... i'll see what i can do? what colors do u suggest? |
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Dec 1 2004, 01:12 AM
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 cameraman swing the focus! Group: Member Posts: 1,880 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,328 |
oh wow very creative! good job
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Dec 1 2004, 11:10 AM
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:: Le Mono :: Group: Member Posts: 67 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 52,334 |
 thanks... i like urs too.
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Dec 1 2004, 01:36 PM
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 Um....Its meeee Group: Member Posts: 2,218 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,264 |
QUOTE u should play around with scroll bar color. it look odd in ur layout. Yeah i think so too. I like it. Good job. 
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Dec 1 2004, 08:48 PM
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:: Le Mono :: Group: Member Posts: 67 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 52,334 |
thanks... i'll play with the scrollies...  what would make it look not odd?
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Dec 1 2004, 09:09 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 507 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 832 |
-I dont think you need the red element, the greenish/yellow color is enough of a contrast in the color pallete
-The text looks odd aligned right -The body should be wider, closer to the face -It would be cool if you could figure out a way to integrate the picture background with the green background. The ending is kind of abrupt. Maybe just center the whole thing into the middle of the screen. |
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Dec 1 2004, 09:15 PM
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:: Le Mono :: Group: Member Posts: 67 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 52,334 |
red? where's the red? i didn't put red in there. at least i didn't mean to (hehe) i kinna like it aligned right but thanks for that uhmm... ending? what ending?  i am not sure what you mean. how do u suggest that integrate it?
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Dec 1 2004, 09:25 PM
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 Amberific. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,913 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,772 |
It hurts my eyes a little.
 I don't think the white text it working too much. It should be black, but that's my opinion. And the scrollbar is too dark for the blog. Making it transparent is something you should consider.Other than that, nice job. |
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Dec 1 2004, 09:28 PM
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:: Le Mono :: Group: Member Posts: 67 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 52,334 |
thanks
working on the scrollie... seems to be everyone's opinion  text black? hm... how about the same green as the background? |
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Dec 1 2004, 09:49 PM
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 define our lives for us. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 11,656 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 43,293 |
i think it's too green.
IT BURNS MY EYES! |
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Dec 1 2004, 09:50 PM
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:: Le Mono :: Group: Member Posts: 67 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 52,334 |
awwh sorries
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Dec 1 2004, 10:28 PM
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 "YeHa" is not a foreign policy Group: Member Posts: 290 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 36,192 |
love it. looks clean, professional--almost clinical.
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Dec 1 2004, 11:12 PM
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:: Le Mono :: Group: Member Posts: 67 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 52,334 |
 thanks
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Dec 2 2004, 10:29 AM
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:: Le Mono :: Group: Member Posts: 67 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 52,334 |
i made the scrollbar transparent
tell what you think. i also took to consider some of the other suggestions you guys mentioned. let me know what you think
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Dec 2 2004, 11:14 AM
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Amberific. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,913 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,772 |
Ah yes, much better.
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Dec 2 2004, 05:21 PM
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 Smile Like a Retard =D Group: Member Posts: 1,350 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 63,186 |
i donno if it's me, but when you look at the blog, the letters kinda blur because of the bg... i like the bg but the color is a little weird, good job =)
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Dec 2 2004, 05:23 PM
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 Stephanie Group: Member Posts: 127 Joined: Dec 2003 Member No: 47 |
looks professional... but having a grid over the image makes the font look weird... i don't know maybe its just my imagination.
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Dec 2 2004, 06:36 PM
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:: Le Mono :: Group: Member Posts: 67 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 52,334 |
yeah i glad you like it now as for the print, i was aiming for the print to look... uhm... not like regular i guess but as for blurring i don't know... i'll see when i start another layout in couple weeks. it's not so bad u can't read it right? let me know  loving the feedback
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