this is kinda untitled, NO IT IS NOT TRUE!!! Options

[sp182gc]

This is not true, I REPEAT-this is not true! i was intending to write a hate or depressed poem because i was angry at my dad, but it didn't quite turn out the way i hoped. anyway, i am a proud virgin, so i was just doing this to teach a lesson i guess.


I use to have it all
But maybe it wasn't enough
So I ran to a boy
When my life got too tough

People saw me as perfect
Flawless, you see
But I guess they didn't know
There's another side to me

Put under too much stress
I couldn't take anymore
I changed a lot about me
The old life left me sore

I thought of somewhere to get help
Then I thought--The man of my dreams...
Maybe he could save me
Or so that's how it seemed

I knocked on his front door
He opened it and said,
"What are you doing here?"When I replied,
"I wish that I were dead."

He let me in and led me to
His very own comfy bed
He wanted to talk, but I said no
I'd rather make love instead.

I needed him to take my grief
Not council me and talk
He plays the bad boy at our school
Now lets see him walk-the-walk

Then one fine day, when life got better
I was acting unlike me
I threw up my dinner and felt real sick
And thought about what could possibly be

I called my friend, the one I trust
She always knows what's best
So she came over and out of her purse
She pulled out "the test"

An hour later, I retrieve
The life changing answer
My friend saw it first, then looked at me
I looked scared back at her

"Oh no..." she said and I knew it all
I knew that I was dead
A million consequental thoughts portrude
The inside of my head

So I thought that life was hard before
But I haven't seen anything yet
I never thought that I'd find out
How angry everyone can get

It seemed the whole world turned on me
With no strength to fight back
I felt so dirty and impure
And with consequences I did not lack

I hope it teaches a lesson
It'll at least be one good thing
"With great power comes great responsibility"
And responsibility it sure does bring

At one time I was innocent
But now look what I've done
Screwed up and made one mistake
And so follows me; a son


Yah, I kno I quoted Spiderman, but it's a good quote and it goes along with the topic. Sorry if it makes it corny but once again, ITS NOT TRUE!!!!

[ComradeRed]

Here's a good follow-up to your poem:

Peggy Sue got pregnant
And was addicted to fifteen drugs
She went down to the abortion clinic
And was accosted by gangs of thugs

Oh, will the fetus be aborted?
By and by Lord, oh by and by
There’s a better home awaiting
In the sky Lord, in the sky

Little Mary was just eleven
And she was raped by her own dad
Danny Quayle said “Have that baby”
But another choice she had

Oh, will the fetus be aborted?
By and by Lord, oh by and by
There’s a better home awaiting
In the sky Lord, in the sky

Annie’s pregnancy would kill her
Doctor’s warning gave her strife
Fundamentalists said “Jesus take her”
She said, “I want my right to life”

Oh, will the fetus be aborted?
By and by Lord, oh by and by
There’s a better home awaiting
In the sky Lord, in the sky

Kathy had two kids already
And an abortion is what she chose
Christian showed her a bloody fetus
She said “That’s fine, I'll have one of those”

Oh, will the fetus be aborted?
By and by Lord, oh by and by
There’s a better home awaiting
In the sky Lord, in the sky

Tanya lived for revolution
Wanted to overthrow the state
She had fifteen Commie babies
Phyllis Schlafly ain't that great?

Or will the fetus
Be aborted…?

Remember... Just say NO to sex with pro-lifers.

[HelloSunshine]

hm....a nice poem

[ComradeRed]

Do you like mine?

[sp182gc]

yeah, i do like yours, but i dont think it's a good follow-up to mine, becuz i dont think the person in my poem would get an abortion. but then again... i dont know her, becuz the poem is make-believe and its just talking about the subject in general. so i actually take that back. it does make a good follow up to mine, especially if that girl is evil ( kinda like me! ) so yeah, it is really good and it does make a good follow-up. there you go!

[ComradeRed]

Thanks!

[heyyfrankie]

I needed him to take my grief
Not council me and talk
He plays the bad boy at our school
Now lets see him walk-the-walk

that was my favorite part!
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that was very interesting! nice job. good job rhyming. those are my favorite kind of poems.

[sp182gc]

thank you!

[smthngcrprategrl...]

awesome job!