3 Things, some poems that need to get typed up |
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3 Things, some poems that need to get typed up |
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catastrophic sweetness ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 92 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 58,334 ![]() |
The Game
Why do we constantly play this game? First one to break the other ones heart gets an 'A' Going at a constant, Then it all comes crashing down, Triggered by one event, We all fall down. We forgive, and we may not forget, but we disregard it, and put it in the past Let the relationship start slow, then grow, to something else beyond Then let the heartfelt emotions be our downfall and we'll all fall down. At what point are we gonna stop forgiving, and not forgetting? Please, another round of the game, even if I lose, it's still time with you Let me fall, Maybe it'll stop hurting, let me fall. Boy with a Yellow Guitar Oh boy, you gotta yellow guitar. So shiny and pretty, just like the sun. And your smiles so great nice and pretty beating down on me so shiny, not whiny. You can swing your guitar around your neck oh boy, oh boy. Round, and round, and round you go. Swing your guitar, sing your sweet melodies into the microphone. Oh, to be the microphone upon that stand. Round and round you go again. To the Unborn Child I'm sorry we had to let you go. And even if you think I don't mean it, I do. Oh, I do. But I gotta take time, for myself. I gotta grow up myself, before I can let you even try. See, your daddy and me, we're not good at this stuff, but we don't want you to grow up, abandoned and alone. So we're taking your life, before it can even start. Not letting you see the evils of this worl, not letting you conquor them. I'm sorry it had to go this way. If I could, I'd turn back the tables of time, and change everything, so your life didn't go this way. Cause I gotta take time to figure this shit out. I gotta grow up myself, before I even let you try. I'm sorry, we had to let you go, and even if you think I don't mean it, I do. Oh, I do. SUPER BIG IMPORTANT NOTE!!! To the Unborn Child, is not written out of my own life experience, more of a friends...if you recognize me from the Girls forum, you may know...just wanted to get that clear. Also, there really is a boy with a yellow guitar XD ![]() |
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catastrophic sweetness ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 92 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 58,334 ![]() |
I'm adding a reply to my own topic because it got kinda pushed back. I didn't say it...but maybe some feedback or reactions? Of any kind.
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![]() hello : ) ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 4,227 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 13,139 ![]() |
i like the poem about the unborn child. it`s really good. =) i would give you criticism and what not but i`m not really good with that stuff, sry~
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catastrophic sweetness ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 92 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 58,334 ![]() |
At least you commented XD
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![]() i've never wanted anything rationale. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 8,449 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 19,045 ![]() |
i like the yellow guitar one...
sounds more like it could be a song tho! a song about a band guy woot woot |
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catastrophic sweetness ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 92 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 58,334 ![]() |
Well, my band and I are planning on using it as a song. Oh man, it's been weeks and I'm still drooling over him.
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