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3 Things, some poems that need to get typed up
swtxcatastrophe
post Nov 5 2004, 04:04 PM
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The Game
Why do we constantly play this game?
First one to break the other ones heart gets an 'A'
Going at a constant,
Then it all comes crashing down,
Triggered by one event,
We all fall down.

We forgive,
and we may not forget,
but we disregard it,
and put it in the past

Let the relationship start slow,
then grow,
to something else beyond
Then let the heartfelt emotions be our downfall
and we'll all fall down.

At what point are we gonna stop forgiving, and not forgetting?
Please, another round of the game,
even if I lose, it's still time with you
Let me fall,
Maybe it'll stop hurting, let me fall.


Boy with a Yellow Guitar
Oh boy,
you gotta yellow guitar.
So shiny and pretty,
just like the sun.

And your smiles so great
nice and pretty
beating down on me
so shiny, not whiny.

You can swing your guitar
around your neck
oh boy,
oh boy.

Round, and round, and round you go.
Swing your guitar,
sing your sweet melodies
into the microphone.
Oh, to be the microphone upon that stand.
Round and round you go again.

To the Unborn Child
I'm sorry
we had to let you go.
And even if you think I don't mean it,
I do.
Oh, I do.

But I gotta take time,
for myself.
I gotta grow up myself,
before I can let you even try.
See, your daddy and me,
we're not good at this stuff,
but we don't want you to grow up,
abandoned and alone.

So we're taking your life,
before it can even start.
Not letting you see the evils of this worl,
not letting you conquor them.

I'm sorry it had to go this way.
If I could,
I'd turn back the tables of time,
and change everything,
so your life didn't go this way.

Cause I gotta take time to figure this shit out.
I gotta grow up myself,
before I even let you try.

I'm sorry,
we had to let you go,
and even if you think I don't mean it,
I do.
Oh, I do.


SUPER BIG IMPORTANT NOTE!!!
To the Unborn Child, is not written out of my own life experience, more of a friends...if you recognize me from the Girls forum, you may know...just wanted to get that clear.

Also, there really is a boy with a yellow guitar XD
 
swtxcatastrophe
post Nov 11 2004, 04:44 PM
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I'm adding a reply to my own topic because it got kinda pushed back. I didn't say it...but maybe some feedback or reactions? Of any kind.
 
xTINAA
post Nov 13 2004, 03:30 AM
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hello : )
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i like the poem about the unborn child. it`s really good. =) i would give you criticism and what not but i`m not really good with that stuff, sry~
 
swtxcatastrophe
post Nov 15 2004, 07:47 PM
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At least you commented XD
 
Rachel
post Nov 16 2004, 09:29 PM
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i've never wanted anything rationale.
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i like the yellow guitar one...


sounds more like it could be a song tho! a song about a band guy woot woot
 
swtxcatastrophe
post Nov 23 2004, 09:30 PM
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Well, my band and I are planning on using it as a song. Oh man, it's been weeks and I'm still drooling over him.
 

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