I Miss Us, poem |
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 Nov 13 2004, 10:55 PM
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 Stay Cheezin  Group: Member Posts: 56 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 50,829  |
"I Miss Us"
I miss the way we used to talk.. The way we laughed and our long walks.. I remember the days since we were five.. Going to school and willing to thrive.. I wonder what happend to those days.. Now we've went our seperate ways.. It seems like we forgot our past.. The past when there was always us.. You were my best friend and I was yours.. I wish that we could have that back.. Because I can't bear but to wonder where you've gone.. It's like I'm the blame for something I've never done.. I miss our friendship and I miss us..  Baby Luv Productionz
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Nov 14 2004, 07:14 PM
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 i've never wanted anything rationale. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 8,449 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 19,045 |
its nice....i suggest try writing something that doesnt have the same rhyme scheme, it can be fun i promise =)
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Nov 15 2004, 07:46 PM
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catastrophic sweetness Group: Member Posts: 92 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 58,334 |
I liked it, sweet and heartfelt.
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Nov 18 2004, 01:16 AM
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 High Voltage!∞ Group: Official Member Posts: 4,728 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,157 |
ooh nice, I wrote two I Miss You poems for my friends....so I know how you feel
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Nov 20 2004, 11:14 AM
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 babygrl23 Group: Member Posts: 88 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 25,911 |
Omg, I love this poem. Very powerful, and a clear message was sent. I completely know how this feels, because I have been in and out of friendships my whole life.
GREAT JOB!!!!! |
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