My Grandma, a poem |
My Grandma, a poem |
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i wrote this poem today, for my grandma, who does everything to help others before she helps herself, she drives from panama city FLA to Warner robins GA just to visit my aunt and uncle and to help others. she drives people to the bank when she goes to georgia once a month, she runs to the store for people who need food, or does arronds for people, she takes care of anyone who may need it, and she doens't expect anything in return. the thing i love most about my grandma is that she is kind to all and always manages to help those who need it, i truly belive she was an angel sent to heaven to help others. she's the best person in my life.i would like some feedback on the poem if that will be possible....here's the poem titled.....
"my grandma" A beautiful angel With a heart so warm Sent from heaven In a woman’s form She helps others In their time of need She does so much And has no greed Always on her feet Going here or there Not wasting any time And always being fair It’s amazing how She can do so much She must be an angel With heaven’s touch How else can you explain The goodness of her ways This woman’s my grandma She never seizes to amaze LeKeyshia Marie Richardson Copyright ©2004 LeKeyshia Marie Richardson |
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