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my poem
eloizhere48
post Nov 9 2004, 11:48 PM
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I Love Andrew!
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this is a poem i wrote ...

LEFT

I cant believe that you left me
Here in the dark
Now that you have broken my heart
I will always have that mark
How can you do this to me
I thought you cared
I guess you didnt feel that way
Now that's all that i can bare
What am I going to do now
Should I cry and cry
Or should I just forget about you
Im still wondering why
I guess I'll have to move on
And I'll have to let you be
But I'll never ever forget
The day you left me

wat do you guys think??
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eloizhere48   my poem   Nov 9 2004, 11:48 PM
MasteRxKiD   Ah, a simple broken-hearted love poem. I'm gue...   Nov 10 2004, 04:06 AM
xSWEETxCANDiix   ^ yep, typo, it's nice =] good job   Nov 12 2004, 06:07 PM


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