my poem |
 Nov 9 2004, 11:48 PM
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 I Love Andrew!  Group: Member Posts: 30 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,111  |
this is a poem i wrote ...
LEFT I cant believe that you left me Here in the dark Now that you have broken my heart I will always have that mark How can you do this to me I thought you cared I guess you didnt feel that way Now that's all that i can bare What am I going to do now Should I cry and cry Or should I just forget about you Im still wondering why I guess I'll have to move on And I'll have to let you be But I'll never ever forget The day you left me wat do you guys think??
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Nov 10 2004, 04:06 AM
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 Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
Ah, a simple broken-hearted love poem.
I'm guessing it's one of your firsts? I think you made a typo. QUOTE I will always that mark
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Nov 12 2004, 06:07 PM
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 High Voltage!∞ Group: Official Member Posts: 4,728 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,157 |
^ yep, typo, it's nice =] good job
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