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 Nov 2 2004, 07:26 AM
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 Aww! ^___^  Group: Member Posts: 184 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,645  |
This was suppose to be in Spanish for my homework, but here's the english version.
Those brown deep pools Are eyes of yours I could get lost If I could stare The promises you say Eyes can tell what is broken The truth unfolds The lies I bury A beauty of a rose It is emerging from the scenery This rose still undiscovered The meaning of it inside you Open your eyes Do you see it? It is love, waiting Slowly the rose darkens Painfully, the tears fall It is too late With one last dove The night covered in shadows I am sorry, my love |
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Nov 3 2004, 05:09 PM
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 Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
Not bad.
It'd be beautiful in Spanish. A little confused of the line QUOTE With one last dove
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Nov 4 2004, 06:25 PM
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 can't believe I let people call me Lynne on here 5 yrs ago o Group: Member Posts: 243 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 54,591 |
yea...
with one last dove it doesnt seem to fit in much... |
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Nov 4 2004, 11:58 PM
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Aww! ^___^ Group: Member Posts: 184 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,645 |
Oh Im sorry about that part, I had to make the spanish version rhyme and I was trying to find some word to atleast make it sound okay in Spanish version, lol.
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