Magical, Silly poem I wrote during school |
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 Jan 10 2006, 09:15 PM
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 Call me C.Annie  Group: Member Posts: 366 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,994  |
Its a stupid poem I wrote during school while we were medatating. They told us to just write what came to mind about something we thought was Magical.
Shes nothing but a silly maid Nothing but a fool Nothing comes to her of joy And all her great memories seem to fade Her love life is over No one to love her Until she met Prince Charming himself It was love at first sight While they danced away the night But the poor maid had left him When the clocktower struck midnight Away she fled to her carraige to leave As her Prince Charming begger her "Please stay with me." The carraige took off as she started to cry She hadent even kissed Prince Charming goodbye Prince Charming missed her every moment of the day And yet, he hadnt gotten her name! He searched for days to find his princess His love was still out there And how he needed her so So his search went faster To every house in town Finally just one house left to check He slipped the glass slipper on step sister #1 It didnt quite fit her, so he moved on. After trying 3 people, he had given up hope. He started to leave, while his princess called out "Wait! Wait! Just one moment please!" She looked so familiar and yet so unknown He slipped on the slipper, and looked up with awe Prince Charming found is princess and forever they remained in love. I told you it was a silly poem :P But C&C is welcome |
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Jan 10 2006, 09:35 PM
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hmm sounds like a certain story i know and love, Cinderella! I love her. but anywho, next time you meditate, make up your own stroy. maybe add some twists. But remember a good poet......uh cant think of anything now, but keep on trying cuz baby there aint no mountain high enough, aint no vally low ebough, aint no river wide enough. haha! yeah...sry bout that...cought up in the moment!
Your best friend! |
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Jan 13 2006, 06:08 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 3,055 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 174,796 |
Cute =]
Reminds me of Cinderella....but in a rhymish way =] |
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Jan 13 2006, 06:26 PM
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 some reason i feel alone...guess cus my true self is never shown Group: Member Posts: 303 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 246,804 |
yeah cinderella but in a poem thing and without the magic.....yeah didnt say anythin bout magic cept for the title named that
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Jan 14 2006, 05:36 AM
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 Yawn Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,530 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,772 |
QUOTE The carraige took off as she started to cry She hadent even kissed Prince Charming goodbye ^loved those lines. Great job with this :) The Cinderella story is always a wonderful story. I don't think it's "silly" at all. I think you did a great job :) keep writing! |
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