Oreo_Bro's Poetry Corner, come sit and read |
Oreo_Bro's Poetry Corner, come sit and read |
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![]() ~The CB Advice Giver~ ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 505 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 53,021 ![]() |
Heres a few of my poems i have gathered up, a few have been posted on some sites, but my best is treasures in you, which was posted on a real poetry site but i have lost the link seeing as it was on my old comp. Anyways, yeah im a guy and i write poetry but its what i do and u girls better not think im lame!
-=Random Crap thing=- You told me that you loved me so, Was it all a lie to make me go, To that place i never wanted to see, Why did you do this, why to me? -=Confused=- Love is such a special thing, It lifts people up and gives them wings, When will i experiance, love like this? Will it be in a hug or my very first kiss? Who is the girl that is ment for me, Do i know her? does she know me? I do so much searching, only to find that im back at the place i started in my mind. Why cant things happen the way i want, Why must i go through these daily taunts a few close friends, a few i just met so many girls, how can i forget? Im just a guy, lost and confused My heart has been broken, much like a fuse tell me the reasond, tell me why, you made me love you, why why why All i want to know, is how it will come by day? by night? by phone call? by drum? how will i find, that special one for me, how do i know..who the right one will be. -=Loved ones=- How many times a day, do we sit down and chat, with our family and loved ones, not bicker and spat, How many times, do we show our love, for the one given to us, by the Lord God above, dont forget to show, your appreciation and care, for one of these days, that loved one wont be their. -=Is it wise to say I love you on April Fools Day=- I ask you this, to all of you out their, to those that are reading, and those that care, would it be wise, on this foolish day, to tell that special some one how they make you feel every day? Would they accept it, or take it as a joke, what would you do, would u begin to choke? Your eyes swelling with tears, as they laugh laugh away, is it smart to say i love you, on april fools day. -=Change=- Changing is normal, part of every persons life, Boys become husbands, and girls become wives, Our moods change as well, from happy to sad, we experiance things that bring us joy, and also things that are bad, A human is forever changing, in fitness and in mind, with each birth brings life, but our lives grow short with time, I can feel myself changing, for better or for worse, some day i'll find the answer, and live with my curse. -=Treasures In You=- There are treasures in life, but owners are few Of money and power to buy things brand new. Yet you can be wealthy and feel regal too, If you will just look for the treasures in you. These treasures in life are not hard to find When you look in your heart, your soul, and your mind. For when you are willing to share what's within, Your fervent search for riches will end. The joy and the laughter, the smile that you bring; The heart unafraid to love and to sing; The hand always willing to help those in need; Ones quick to reach out, to labor and feed. So thank you for sharing these great gifts inside; The caring, the cheering, the hug when one cried. Thanks for the energy, encouragement too, And thank you for sharing the treasures in you. Treasure in u is my best by far. anyways im tired, later |
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![]() Will write poetry for sex! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 ![]() |
QUOTE Anyways, yeah im a guy and i write poetry but its what i do and u girls better not think im lame! I'm a guy, and as many of the writers here are, it's what I do as well. I do readings for arts festivals, have contributed to a few poetry books, etc etc. It's good to have a new addition to the usual writing posters. Welcome. ![]() And, BTW, the girls definitely won't think you're lame. Especially considering the fact that the guys won't. |
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![]() creepy heather ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 4,208 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,580 ![]() |
youre right, the last one is the best...i really like it...keep writing and posting!
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SOS Brigade!! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775 ![]() |
yep i think last is best and keep writing we all have a lot of potential =P
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![]() Can't have the hand without the cock. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 2,481 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 50,622 ![]() |
QUOTE(rainnydaiis @ Oct 7 2004, 5:35 PM) yep i think last is best and keep writing we all have a lot of potential =P yeah and u sure want a "treasure" of ur own huh? ![]() ![]() ![]() bye buddy |
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![]() ~The CB Advice Giver~ ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 505 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 53,021 ![]() |
QUOTE(jambaJUICE @ Oct 7 2004, 6:27 PM) yeah and u sure want a "treasure" of ur own huh? ![]() ![]() ![]() bye buddy awww ^_^ |
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![]() I have eccentric ideas... ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 169 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,035 ![]() |
I like them too... Good job Oreo... Heh...
*wanders around* Good luck with that girl too... Heh... I think you have endured enough of being the 'good' guy... I know how that feels... |
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![]() ~The CB Advice Giver~ ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 505 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 53,021 ![]() |
just wrote..
My mask, its peaceful, with a smile painted on, It helps me belive all my scars are gone all the emotional pain that i have felt in my life, are now gone when i put on the mascarade for my life. I smile for people, knowing in my heart i frown, I laugh for my friends, even though im feeling down, I listen to those who need it, when my own heart wants to talk I feel so alone, so down in my walk I put on my mask, every day, it hides my scares, my pain, im afriad, that someday my friends, whom i thought i could trust, would look down and frown apon me with disgust, My mask, so peaceful, so open, so right, would no longer hide, my pain and my fright. |
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![]() aiko Nakamura at your service ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 1,518 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 18,144 ![]() |
i like the last one& the mask one the best.
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![]() ~The CB Advice Giver~ ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 505 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 53,021 ![]() |
QUOTE(dreamerOi @ Oct 24 2004, 10:39 PM) i like the last one& the mask one the best. ![]() yes i am sweetie ![]() |
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Eternal Syn ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 ![]() |
Let me say this first off. There's nothing wrong with a guy writing poetry. I'm a guy. But anyways, yeah, I do think that Treasures in You is your best so far. The Mask is good too, seems like somethin` I do whenever I'm feelin` down.
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