The Train Wreck, sorta angsty |
The Train Wreck, sorta angsty |
Oct 26 2004, 07:38 PM
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catastrophic sweetness ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 92 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 58,334 |
My poetry is never much, just something for me to get my feeling out, but I still like to see what people say. I don't want to explain the subject publicaly, but if you IM me I can give you the 'inspriation' [if that's what you call it] for this piece.
-the train wreck- It's weird how I can relate to how you felt those last hours, constantly. It was also weird how I've felt ever since you left me here, that feeling really hasn't left, nor do I think it ever will. I've only got questions, question that will never have anwsers. Why didn't you get help? I know it's hard, for someone so strong like you to let others in, but it helps, see, I would know it. Why did you feel the way you did? All that surronded you was love. Were you out to hurt all of us? Your mission was accomplished if that's it. You were just gone, all in a matter of seconds, And I'll always remember the seconds, forever. |
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swtxcatastrophe The Train Wreck Oct 26 2004, 07:38 PM
MasteRxKiD Yeah, 'inspiration' is the word.
Poetry, i... Oct 28 2004, 03:38 PM
swtxcatastrophe Thanks for the reply. I love feedback. Yeah, I wro... Oct 28 2004, 04:15 PM
MasteRxKiD Well, maybe you can utilize those same emotions an... Oct 28 2004, 05:12 PM
swtxcatastrophe I have some better things, I was just going throug... Oct 28 2004, 08:56 PM![]() ![]() |