suicide, tell me wat u think!! Options

[the...bob]

ok im not depressed or nething but i was really mad wen i wrote this ok:

suicide:

i cannot live
i cannot die
i cannot cease the flow of time
so i pass,
from one plane to another
its not your fault,
dear mother and father
i leave you now
with this note of despair
i feel it now
the hands of death
always and forever,cold and bare
so now i lie
at the foot of my bed,
the blood flowing freely
from
my
head

critisims is required!! i INSIST