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Oct 20 2004, 07:38 PM
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having eyes as bright as the sky
your spirit so strong and a soul thats free the smile on your face is as glamorous as the sea just to hold you so tight, id give everything up ill throw away everything i have just to be with you to prove to you our love is more important than aything else id be that man to cheer you up everytime you frown ill be the one to pick you up everytime you fall im not like everyone else thats just comes and go i wont leave u stranded or ever leave your side ill show you the kind of love u want and deserve wheres its just me and you holding hands under the starlit sky a place where nothing is wrong and every thing is right id do whatever i can ill promise everything to you, the love and desire if i can just be your man feeling down and under today so heres my lito poem hope you like |
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dispn0ygonekrazy promise Oct 20 2004, 07:38 PM
Cloud_X That's good pretty straight forward. Oh and I ... Oct 20 2004, 07:40 PM
dispn0ygonekrazy heheh thnx man Oct 20 2004, 08:36 PM
Heathasm i like how the poem begins :] i think this is one ... Oct 21 2004, 04:50 PM
dispn0ygonekrazy thnx !! yeh im glad im outta of rhyming.. ... Oct 21 2004, 08:21 PM![]() ![]() |