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more at eleven
ryfitaDF
post Oct 19 2004, 10:17 PM
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this one is actually kind of old. i wrote it directly after seeing bowling for columbine. i really just fealt like posting somthing and having you kids go "yay" or "boo". this one is kind of manson-esque (think "posthuman" meets "anti-christ superstar"). i can't wait for all yo comments! happy.gif

MORE AT ELEVEN
the weapons of the mass destruction
must be real but so well hid
the food your eating might be fatal
the freaks at school will shoot your kid
the sun will die sooner than you think
Armageddon’s zoning in
All of this and so much more
More details at eleven

Cause we use fear to advertise
To make you watch and subsidize
Our sympathy is just a show
To get our money then go home
If we can’t use a whore to sell duct tape
We’ll tell you that your life’s at steak
We don’t find ways to stop the hating
We milk the tit for all it’s ratings

Their’s been a drive by somewhere close
I’m pretty sure the culprit’s black
so when you see minorities
be sure to never turn your back
homicide an all-time high
seventeen clips on the floor hollowed
wherever there is gun violence
the NRA is sure to follow
the constitution says we can
we have the right to bear arms
NRA pride with guns held high
You’ll sure be proud when they do you harm
The war on terror televised
There is no bigger contradiction
they want us all to live in fear
you’re watching terror televivion

We’ll be right back after these messages

Buy these clothes or boys won’t like you
Buy this deodorant or girls won’t f*ck you
Get implants or boys won’t date you
See the passion or god will hate you

Cause we use fear to advertise
To make you watch and subsidize
Our sympathy is just a show
To get our money then go home
If we can’t use a whore to sell duct tape
We’ll tell you that your life’s at steak
We don’t find ways to stop the hating
We milk the tit for all it’s ratings

Details on this war, more at eleven
The way that you should think, More at eleven
The speech you need to hear, more at eleven
The world you love to fear, more at eleven
 
TheSilenceInDict...
post Oct 20 2004, 03:43 PM
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All I can say is 'Wow.'
I usually give comments, but all I really can say is that I like it a lot...
Make it a song yet?
 
the...bob
post Oct 22 2004, 01:20 AM
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wow.....lol that was a sexy poem haahaa *dats ma word* newayz yea that was really kool, it shud be a song or sumtin lol
 

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