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post Oct 10 2004, 09:05 AM
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Haywood Bay

If you like the way I treat you then come out to Haywood Bay,
But if you like to be abused, then with him I guess you'll stay.
They say that nice guys finish last, but that is just cliche,
So if you want to try and make a change then come with me today.

I'm not sure who put it in your head; this idea of being low,
But whoever it was doesn't have a heart, and should realize that you glow.
You radiate your beauty; it's such a magnificent show,
But you never seem to take my word, you always "have to go".

You ask me why I try so hard, and I answer subtle and true,
I have no other motives, no permiscuous things to do.
It's really all quite simple, I want to take care of you,
But I know that will never happen, you'll never let me through.

So I leave this offer on the table should you really want to say,
"I feel like I am happy, I look forward to the day".
Just call on me to pine for you, and fight your troubles away,
You know where you can find me...down by Haywood Bay.


[Footnote: I live in a place called Haywood Bay...and this is written for a certain person who never seems to give me a chance. Enjoy.]
 

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CrackedRearView   Haywood Bay   Oct 10 2004, 09:05 AM
MasteRxKiD   Damn, very well done, Justin. Seems like a poem w...   Oct 10 2004, 01:01 PM
omg_melface   Sounds like a wonderful emo song title. I love it...   Oct 10 2004, 01:41 PM
jambaJUICE   wow. hehe. it sounds like an advertisement. -- ...   Oct 10 2004, 03:04 PM
ashesinthefall   thats really good   Oct 10 2004, 09:37 PM
CrackedRearView   I'll post more often so I can get added to you...   Oct 10 2004, 09:53 PM
MasteRxKiD   Just make the request and I'll gladly add you....   Oct 11 2004, 12:11 AM
CrackedRearView   Thanks for adding me, I'll post some more of m...   Oct 12 2004, 09:27 PM
mSz_dOrk_anGeL   <3 Its wonderful.   Oct 15 2004, 09:53 PM
dreamerOi   mang you write good poems& short storys. i dig...   Oct 15 2004, 11:45 PM
Azarel   Beautifully written; you take a subject which is e...   Aug 9 2005, 02:48 PM


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