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 Oct 18 2004, 01:37 PM
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 wanderlust personified.  Group: Official Designer Posts: 7,515 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 797  |
Haha, alright. I wrote these when I was in the 9th and 10th grade so they're a bit elementary. I'm not much of a writer and I thought it would be fun to poke fun at my poor attempt to be a poet.
Here we go.  ----------------------------------------------------------- Lessons In Love If love is suppossed to feel so good Then why do I feel this way? If love is suppossed to heal the heart Then why is it causing me pain? If love is suppossed to make one happy Then tell me why I frown? If love is suppossed to uplift the spirit Then why am I feeling down? If love is suppossed to satisfy? Then why do I long for more? If love is suppossed to make one smile Then what am i crying for? If love is suppossed to last forever Then why are we falling apart? If love is suppossed to be beneficial Then why is it breaking my heart? If love is suppossed to make one better Then why do I feel worse? If love is suppossed to feel so good Then tell me why love hurts? ----------------------------------------------------------- Sunny Days The pouring rain has come to an end And the sky is turning blue The clouds have moved and the sun is shining All because of you. You've brought a certain sparkle To this life of mine And now I hold a love for you That will stand the test of time. You've been such a good friend to me I still can't believe it's true That God had brought a gift for me That wonderful gift is you. But I know that I must let you go Though it is sadly breaking my heart But know that I will always love you Even when we're apart. So the sun will keep on shining Even when you're away Because your soul has become a part of me So I look forward to sunny days. ----------------------------------------------------------- Our Love I never thought that I would fall in love With someone as special as you For you are my shooting star Making all my dreams come true Nothing can describe the love That you bring to me each day For you have captured my heart In you very own special way You shower me with your exquisite love And please me with your delightful charm You cover me with soft, tender kisses And enfold me in your loving arms Promise me that you'll always be mine And never fall to someone else Because you know my love will always be The greatest thing you've ever felt No one else can love you like I do Because my love is beyond compare For nothing can be better Than this treasured love that we share ----------------------------------------------------------- Daggers In Your Smile Across the room, I see you smiling at me My stomach churns as I turn away disgustedly Behind that smile there lies a frown Where cruel intentions can be found I will not fall for your stupid game And I won't allow you to cause me pain I long to fall out of your gaze So wipe that foolish smirk off your face Deep down I know who you really are And that your heart is as black as tar Inside I know that you are wicked and vile And I am aware of the daggers in your smile ----------------------------------------------------------- An Unforgettable Love Alone I sit in solitude Reminiscing on our past Of a love that was so special A love that failed to last I look back on all the memories That you and I had shared Moments that can never be forgotten But, sadly, are no longer there Unfortunate is its end But maybe it was for the best However, there's one more thing I ask of you Please follow this last request Please don't forget the love we once shared Keep it close to your heart Remember me when we're together And even more when we're apart My very first true love That is who you are And I will always love you More than anyone else by far ----------------------------------------------------------- Set Me Free I think I'd like to Because I've never met anyone as thoughtful as you. Every word that escapes your precious lips Carries a thought provoking abyss. I've engaged in your contemplations and pondered your intelligence, And for you I've developed a longing dependence, Desiring your love and warmth to surround me And for your guidance to escape the world of falsity around me. I desire the ability to perceive the world as you do, In order to live a life of integrity, honesty, and truth. The path I am following will only lead to my spiritual fatality. Only your spring of knowledge can guide me to complete tranquility. For so long have I dealt with trials and tribulations, Suffering from pain leading to my heart's incarceration. I no longer want to cope, only you can set me free. Teach me to spread my wings and to fly into boundless liberty. I long to live joyously without hesitation, Free of corruption, dishonesty, and trepidation. Only your spirit can lead me to this perfection, Providing me with instruction, wisdom, and protection. ----------------------------------------------------------- There's a lot more, but that's all I'll post for now. I haven't written any poetry since then. That was over 5 years ago. |
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Oct 18 2004, 03:26 PM
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 Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
Wow, that is some pretty damn good love poetry, for the age at when you wrote them.
I'll provide better feedback when I'm not so damn lazy. |
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Oct 18 2004, 03:33 PM
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te quiero Group: Banned Posts: 2,586 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 14,678 |
good job, rox. :sigh: you make 9th and 10th grade sound so .. far back. =/ i'm only in 10th grade
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Oct 18 2004, 06:54 PM
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*claps* Nice job back in the day haha .. You know what I mean -_- .. anyway .. I love em
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Oct 18 2004, 07:16 PM
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SOS Brigade!! Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775 |
omg this is very good.. i like it all =P i'm in 10th grade and i can't write poems like that...
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Oct 18 2004, 07:26 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
HOLY SHIT never thought roxy was a poet lol GOOD ASS JOB GIRL!!
i like ur poems |
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Oct 18 2004, 08:10 PM
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wanderlust personified. Group: Official Designer Posts: 7,515 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 797 |
LIARS!!!
Who am I kidding, I'm no poet. But thanks for the kind comments anyway. I still laugh when I read them. I was such a sap. |
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Oct 18 2004, 11:19 PM
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 Can't have the hand without the cock. Group: Member Posts: 2,481 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 50,622 |
Lol. Yes, a sap you were, and poet maybe you think you're not.
But those were pretty darn good. 
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Oct 19 2004, 05:50 PM
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 What the fack. Group: Official Member Posts: 6,164 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,519 |
Wow, those are awesome. They're crisp, clear, and right to the point with a deep meaning. Why not continue writing poems?
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Oct 19 2004, 08:20 PM
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wanderlust personified. Group: Official Designer Posts: 7,515 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 797 |
QUOTE(tainted_angel @ Oct 19 2004, 6:50 PM) Wow, those are awesome. They're crisp, clear, and right to the point with a deep meaning. Why not continue writing poems? I stopped because I wasn't inspired. I guess love inspires me and your first love is one of the most extreme I guess... I plan on writing songs when I find time. Soon I'll have my own original music to play on the guitar... eh, maybe. |
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