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 Oct 14 2004, 10:35 PM
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 LaYdEe MaRyCeLL  Group: Member Posts: 9 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 28,133  |
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A Poem By: SMoOnaLwAyZ 09132004 ~*~ You think that it's alright. That it was done over one night. But you are wrong. Now hear my silent song... You hurt me so bad. I was so mad. I wanted to die, But all I could do was cry. In my heart I knew you were the one, That I could hold on. But you made it into a hurtful game, And I have you to blame. I thought we could be more then friends. But sadly, you found a girlfriend. You made me believed that we had a chance. When you asked me to the dance. But then you go get a girl. Man, you just make me want to hurl! It's been along time that we haven't talk. Like an old man that couldn't walk. But now again I'm your 'Buddy.' God, sometimes I feel like such a Dummy. I don't know why again we are friends, Even when I know it will soon end. Sometimes I think you're nothing but a lie. But soon you will be judge and now... Good Bye. SMoOnaLwAyZ (o^_^o) |
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Oct 14 2004, 10:51 PM
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 Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
Ack, sorry to hear that, if the inspiration is from true events.
Ehhh, kinda cheesy, but it works. |
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Oct 14 2004, 10:53 PM
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 lick me Group: Member Posts: 3,044 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 44,013 |
looks more written out for a song :o
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Oct 14 2004, 11:24 PM
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SOS Brigade!! Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775 |
i like it =P because it reminds me of my old poems GJ and i know youll improve =P
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Oct 15 2004, 04:10 AM
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Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
QUOTE(rainnydaiis @ Oct 14 2004, 8:24 PM) i like it =P because it reminds me of my old poems GJ and i know youll improve =P Ahah! I knew it! You DO know you've improved! |
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