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 Oct 7 2004, 09:24 PM
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An ordinary girl...smart, pretty, friendly...happy? I've been called everything BUT ordinary. I'm not the smartest, prettiest, girl you've ever seen. I'm a loner...I don't fit in with everyone else. I always stand out in a crowd. But all my life...I've been wanting to shout...I'm okay with being me...
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Oct 7 2004, 09:32 PM
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SOS Brigade!! Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775 |
hmm simple and good... keep it up =P
THOUGHT IT WAS AN INTRO AT FIRST =P |
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Oct 8 2004, 02:13 AM
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 Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
I'm confused with the first two sentences.
Very awkward sounding. Very short and straight to the point...I think you can go off in so many directions from there if you'd like to. |
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Oct 8 2004, 10:13 AM
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 don't worry, be happy~ Group: Member Posts: 1,538 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,899 |
kinda confusing..... but i sorta get it.
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Oct 8 2004, 10:30 AM
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 Don't wake ghostie. Group: Official Member Posts: 3,546 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 2,405 |
I think it would be better as a haiku. It isn't very artistic that way, in fact it's just a statement. Be a little more creative.
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Oct 8 2004, 02:43 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 181 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 6,300 |
It's okay, i kinda feel the same way a lot. people say they're loners, but they don't know shit about loneliness. You, however, seem to get it...
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Oct 11 2004, 11:34 PM
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 lick me Group: Member Posts: 3,044 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 44,013 |
Its better off a poem, start if off with the format :) Nice job thoe..
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