What Must Not Be Seen, Poem... By Me... |
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What Must Not Be Seen, Poem... By Me... |
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![]() I have eccentric ideas... ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 169 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,035 ![]() |
I stepped into the doorway,
And saw what must not be seen, I thought my eyes deceived me, But I knew he was a fiend. My mother was sitting there, With a hand upon her cheek, My father standing over her, With a hand rose rather bleak. Emotions running through me, I wondered what I had seen, Frightened, and despairing, I ran and hoped not to be seen. My mother tried to explain it, My father tried as well, But the feelings inside me, Knew not all was well. I brushed it off not knowing, The vast hole left in my heart, While I pretended all was forgiven, The pain still crept in my thoughts. Now it has returned again, The pain that the night had brought, But I can’t bring myself to tell anyone, For fear of what they thought. So now no one will ever know, The pain within my soul, For I won’t let anyone in, To see the pain in whole. Edit: Ummm yeah... I kinda wrote this after a while... It is a true story... |
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 ![]() |
FEEDBACK ay random guy nicely done poem i can relate to it and every word and line meant something to relate in life i like it good job
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SOS Brigade!! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775 ![]() |
wow this poem is like soo good... keep writing love it =P
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 ![]() |
man sam 100 something posts wahhh im still in 200 something lol
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![]() I have eccentric ideas... ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 169 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,035 ![]() |
That's for the compliments I appreciate them...
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![]() don't worry, be happy~ ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 1,538 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,899 ![]() |
wow!!! that's an awsome poem!!
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