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Final Goodbye, A poem I made, PLS READ!
Foolish Heart
post Oct 1 2004, 08:33 PM
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Aww! ^___^
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It's the darkness that counts
The shadow lurking around
Those senses always awake
Death creeps in by your side
Wings are broken
Unnexpectedly bleeding inside
Shallow dreams you try and stop
But the tears awakened you from fear
You'll see, the ending is near
The angels are singing
The sun is setting
Too late, I must say
A beauty in my hand
Those thorns cut through, blood drips
This time I put the rose down
This last rose, for my final goodbye

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Foolish Heart   Final Goodbye   Oct 1 2004, 08:33 PM
MasteRxKiD   I'm a fan of poetry styled in that manner. I w...   Oct 1 2004, 08:55 PM


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