Gun Point Options

[rainnydaiis]

It has a special meaning i mixed the explanation of Love and Death =P

The black cold stare of the gun pointed at me. Movement not a possibility due to body paralization. This fear of getting shot overcoming all my other emotions and my thoughts. The gun fires the bullet that is traveling incredibly fast directed straight at the heart. The heart being a fragile organ having only ribs that would break apart in seconds. The pain that rushes through the body, the pain that seems so unbearable.

Laying on the floor, coldness crawling up from my legs to my head little by little. The blood leaking from my body spreading out all around me. My life seaping through a little hole that pierced through me. I try my best to grasp the little bit of life and warmth within my body. But being such a small amount it disappears. I seem to drift away from this cold world only seeing my body laying there on the floor... Lifeless.. Not being able to go back.

Finding myself before a humongous gate that you cannot see the end off.. A man standing there with a huge book looking through. I wait to meet this man thats the only person there and seems to know about this place which I am in. I look around only seeing a little glimpse of whats past the gate. I saw streets made of gold.. Houses made out of diamonds and earths most precious jewels. I walked up to this man with the book and when i walked up he opened up the book where all this writing was written. Without any talk at all he dropped me.

This place he dropped me to.. looked like a living nightmare... A horrible place where one would not want to be. The sounds around me of people screaming and the sounds of pain and the sounds of talking all around... The things I saw was sights so unbearable.. People suffering... People hurting... People only knowing pain... I see this place and never want to go back. I think to myself i want to go back, I want to go back. Then awaking from this nightmare or a dream. I find myself learning that Death is not a thing i want to wait for.

[melface]

That's something totally different from what you've written before...

I like seeing the way you experimented with this... it's nice...

[rainnydaiis]

haha you gotta read it carefully to get it =P and its a whole metaphor to tell you +P

[j x tEARz]

Wow..You took truth (well, the truth that people believe.) and made it into a short story/poem.

Since when were you into English again?? -0-;;

Nice story/poem though!!