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 Sep 26 2004, 07:36 AM
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 bang bang! my baby shot me down!  Group: Member Posts: 754 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 23,848  |
Uh...first one posted here..not great but eh
from the ones iv lost to the ones iv gained you have kept me strong all the way. your love has sustained me for the timeless years that youve loved me ill remember i swear this is the last time youll hear my voice please forgive me this is my choice |
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Sep 26 2004, 10:20 AM
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SOS Brigade!! Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775 |
nice i like the tone to it but i say you make a little slight change to the line where it says ill remenber i swear...
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