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The Soul That's Lost
Dark's Angel
post Aug 9 2006, 02:24 PM
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Walking around blindly
Like a hollow shell
I'm searching for something I can't find
There's something beyond my reach

Ghostly cries of pain
Continue to echo from my cold body
My heart never beats
But my resolve is always there

Shades of gray
Are above my head
Floating slowly as a feather
Something is calling out
Bringing me closer to a light

As I touch the wispy soul
Everything is encased in darkness around me
I'm far away
No one's here
And I can't forget
I won't forget

How I came to be here.

My hands are stained
With my own blood
Shaking horribly as I remember.
I curse myself
And my past decisions

I knew thee well...
But, you will see me again
I stumble deeper into the pits of hell.
 
wildncrazyath3rt
post Mar 16 2007, 07:08 AM
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well done=]
i like the mood of it
well done=]

I want to put it on my website.
Pm me about it
 

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