how cute?!, my friend wrote this |
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 Sep 15 2004, 07:28 PM
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me and alla mi friends have this book
that we write poems in and id like to share one that mi friend aj wrote, for his girlfriend "i wrote your name in the sky the wind washed it away i wrote yur name at the ocean and the water washed it away i wrote yur name in mi heart and foreer it will stay" yeah i thought it was so kute when he wrote it so yeah i had to share it |
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Sep 15 2004, 07:29 PM
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damn that is cute hehehe
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Sep 15 2004, 08:03 PM
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 Ah, mon Dieu ! Group: Member Posts: 2,274 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,587 |
 how cute
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Sep 15 2004, 09:14 PM
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I am Sandy. Hear me roar. Group: Member Posts: 1,152 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,896 |
thats kyoooote*
but ive seen it posted on other websites, but still veryy cute |
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Sep 21 2004, 11:56 AM
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cb=bullshit. Group: Member Posts: 1,783 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,793 |
Yeah, um... That little poem is very common...
Your friend needs originality. It's nice that she actually remembered it, though... I give her a prop for that... |
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Sep 23 2004, 05:13 PM
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Brie Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,172 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,548 |
Err..
*koff* Sorry, but I really don't think it's that original. Cute, sure. Original, no. It's nice.. maybe she should change it a bit? Whatever. It's her writing. >_> |
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Sep 23 2004, 05:23 PM
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 Day's Nearly Over Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 4,553 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 45,183 |
er..
a) it seems too girly for a guy b) he didn't write it, I've seeen that a lot. |
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Sep 25 2004, 09:24 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 875 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 13,841 |
QUOTE(omg_melface @ Sep 21 2004, 11:56 AM) Yeah, um... That little poem is very common... Your friend needs originality. It's nice that she actually remembered it, though... I give her a prop for that... yeah ive heard it a few times, but overall is a cute poem |
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