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quick write
__hopefullie__
post Oct 5 2004, 11:05 PM
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well i wrote this in like...5 min. so its not very great.

friends are supposed to be there for you
through the thick and the thin
but what if they dont have a clue
about whats crawling underneath your skin

at first everything may seem all right
then everything starts to fall apart
yet u keep telling yourself you guys are still tight
but you know the real truth in your heart

as time goes by you both start to change
for the better or for the worse
things between you will start getting strange
then itll start to feel like a curse

sooner or later youll start to crack
an find your world has turned pitch black

yea...well a friend just...changed over the past months. sad.gif mad.gif
 

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__hopefullie__   quick write   Oct 5 2004, 11:05 PM
Heathasm   its cool...the stanzas end very blunt and suddenly...   Oct 6 2004, 10:14 AM


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