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My poem, I haven't thought up a title yet!
SteveObscure
post Sep 9 2004, 11:46 PM
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The Unfortunate One
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Your words, they see through me
Intertwine with all my senses
They caress my weary heart
Fill me up with joy.

All else melts away when you speak
Resonating gently in my skin, your words
All else doesn't matter, just you.
Let me fall into a pit of hope
A pit of your voice
All around me
All innocent.

Without your gentle words massaging
I am nothing.

Without your soft vocal comfort
I am not alive.

You animate my soul with your breath
as you have done so
Don't cease to breathe and let the silence assemble.

I fear silence without you.

I fear not hearing your picturesque whispers
in my heart.
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I'm not too well when it comes to thinking up titles!! happy.gif
Tell me what you think. Please be gentle! laugh.gif
 

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obscureterminus   My poem   Sep 9 2004, 11:46 PM
omg_melface   I think it's absolutely beautiful... You'r...   Sep 11 2004, 01:51 PM


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