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Like A Rose In Concrete, ....a poem
song_gurl
post Sep 6 2004, 09:38 AM
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this is a poem called "like a rose in concrete" i wrote. i don't know if its finished but here is what i have. give me you input after you read it plz. some parts are a little cheesy but its what came to mind.

like a rose in concrete
your beautiful to me
when i see you now
i want to fall to my knees
i just can't help but to let you be
like a rose in concrete
your beautiful to me

like a rose in concrete
you stand tall and strong
when i see you walking
the walls around my heart fall
then my heart runs
with no one to call
like a rose in concrete
you stan strong and tall

like a rose in concrete
youre unique in a way
you are the lighthouse
that guides my way
one little seagull
one big bay
like a rose in concrete
your unique in a way
 

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